Saturday, December 3, 2011

My insistent self--a haiku from Al Black







My insistent self


Begs me for attention like 


A leg humping dog




from friend Al Black, who knows how to turn a phrase!
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6 comments:

  1. Dave KingDecember 4, 2011 at 2:59 AM

    The last line came as a bit of a jolt.
    Now I like it - very much indeed.
    The last line now is its strength.
    As they say, it grows on one.

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  2. AnonymousDecember 4, 2011 at 4:56 PM

    Holy wow. Nicely done.

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  3. ThatcherDecember 4, 2011 at 5:58 PM

    Woof!

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  4. Al BlackDecember 4, 2011 at 9:34 PM

    Thanks for posting my haiku. I try to write something everyday.

    Being in your blog is much better than the dog showing me love and affection.

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  5. -waltDecember 25, 2011 at 6:27 PM

    This is so like Al - miss him.

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  6. -waltDecember 25, 2011 at 6:27 PM

    This is so like Al - miss him.

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