Saturday, December 3, 2011

My insistent self--a haiku from Al Black







My insistent self


Begs me for attention like 


A leg humping dog




from friend Al Black, who knows how to turn a phrase!

6 comments:

  1. The last line came as a bit of a jolt.
    Now I like it - very much indeed.
    The last line now is its strength.
    As they say, it grows on one.

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  2. Thanks for posting my haiku. I try to write something everyday.

    Being in your blog is much better than the dog showing me love and affection.

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  3. This is so like Al - miss him.

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  4. This is so like Al - miss him.

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